I haven't seen the movie so I don't know what really happens, but I thought this one was good. But I think the way the person talked about the end of the world was a little too short, the end was really good though.
I did not like it at all. The way it's written is so weird, the story though wasn't bad. The way she dies is completely different, but the rest stays quite the same. He's lost after she dies but he knows he got to stay strong knowing that he will see her again.
The story could have been better if it was well written. But at least there are the characters with a different story, like they don't sing they live in a tree like normal chipmunks where as in the movie they're like civilized and rock stars.
I love this movie and I think this fanfiction is just really good because in the movie the end is like not complete something's missing. So when I read this I thought "yay a real end !" so yeah really good.
Well it's short with a little bit of surf, a lot of friendship. Wish it could have been longer but I quite liked it. We can all (boys or girls) identify to these three about friendship that is a big part of our lives.
I haven't seen this movie but this scene makes me want to see it. Even if it's short I thought the writing style was very good.
Well thought. I would have wanted to read about Eric becoming a mermaid.
I would have seen their life in the future completely different but this was good to read I think and we can feel that this person is really into writing about this movie.
I like the story but it doesn't beat the movie which I think is "perfect" with the love story, the issues, the end. Plus it's just one big paragraph that's hard to read.
Easy to read plus really interesting I think, the story could have been boring but this was well done. I would never had thought of writing about that so I'd say that it makes it even better.
